Relaunched January 2010: The news and information blog of Andy Duncan's Journalistic Writing course, ENGL 336, at Frostburg State University.
Marcus, your post lacks a headline. Also, "overblown" is your opinion, and "controversial" is a cliche; all presidents and governors are controversial.Ideally, too, you should hotlink words in your sentence. Links are more readable that way.
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Marcus, your post lacks a headline. Also, "overblown" is your opinion, and "controversial" is a cliche; all presidents and governors are controversial.
Ideally, too, you should hotlink words in your sentence. Links are more readable that way.
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